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标题: [原创]梧桐山征联 [打印本页]

作者: 忘了过去 时间: 2007-5-20 17:01
标题: [原创]梧桐山征联
<p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: 87.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">梧桐山征联：<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: 87.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">绿锦被梧山，凤影千秋人独好<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: 87.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">云根植海气，岚烟百叠雨重来<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: 87.0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: 87.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">郁气漫香江，听虫鸟合弦，梧木幽深期凤至<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: 87.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">四时如画障，看风烟腾幻，岭云绿透载春多<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: 87.0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: 87.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">名传胜地珠三角，入此寻幽，相共鸟趣溪声，梧遮花眼<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: 87.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">秀拔天南第一峰，登高极目，尽识香江富丽，粤海繁华</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: 87.0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p> </p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: 87.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"></span> </p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: 87.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">一个杂联</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: 87.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">会心一笑，沧浪不远<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: 87.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">负手无言，天地之间<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p>[em11]

作者: 晕倒一片 时间: 2007-5-20 18:26
四个联都很好，顶一下[em02][em02][em02]

作者: 私奔 时间: 2007-5-21 04:18
<font face="隶书" color="#47b12c" size="5">第三偶个人觉得意趣宽一些</font>

作者: 大肠世家 时间: 2007-6-1 05:54
<p>联是好联，但如果是参赛联的话，这样写很危险。第三联的“趣”字，我怀疑懂得此解的人很少；甚至第一联的“被”字我都担心。一旦初评者看不懂，很可能会立即枪毙的，而不会像我们在网上一样用心推敲。看从前的风景楹联和现在的区别有多大吧，现今古文不及格的人实在太多了些，而且鲜有人肯为了学问而“得罪人”，即使诗坛也是如此。</p><p>唯一一次目睹现场评联是在厦门某公园里。我那时还没有打印机，写了30几联事小，抄写倒用去近四个小时，弄得手曲如鹰爪王他徒弟。第二天带着稿件去，见评委们都有了岁数，特地摆出恭恭敬敬的姿势双手奉上，并站边上看了一会儿。结果发现负责初选的先生一直保持着下弦月嘴型（当然不是难过，而是自负或说装作自负），仰着头垂着眼看作品，一联瞄十秒钟左右。可怜的大肠哥当时已自命网络第四高手，见状极为不平，悻悻然滚蛋了，呵呵。</p>

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